Chocolate Factory!!

Once upon a time there was 5 students from Kaitao who won the golden puppy to get into the chocolate factory. They got to stay there for the whole day and look at Mrs Collie Conka's inventions. The 5 students were Dannielle, Autumn, Jaysha, Carl and Eron, but all of these people were not good people except 4 one, his name was Eron.

When they got there Collie welcomed them with a big chocolate slide which they slid down in a big lolly pop that had got cut in half and then got seats put in it. When we got inside the factory we got to go in this big chocolate room which everything was eatable. While everyone was eating all the chocolate Collie was day dreaming about her dog!! Snuffles, then she told us that we had to go but Carl was drinking the chocolate water and then he fell in. When he fell in he saw lots of Cumpa Lumpas with a huge hover to clean all the chocolate water out and put other chocolates in. He got sucked in too and he got drained to the sea and a few minutes later was found by his parents and taken home. As Collie was taken us to the next 1 Autumn ran into the squirrel home and got thrown into there big tree and never returned down again because she got put as their queen for trying to run away from the group.

We carried on. We got to the next destination and she gave a bubble gum that can never loose its taste. We ate them for the rest of the time we were there. Jaysha stayed behind and lost all her teeth for eating all the chewing gum. She got squeezed to get all the gum out of her with there removal ball. Then her and her mum got taken out of the factory and got told never to return or else!! there was 2 more people left. Dannielle and Eron. We got taken to a museum of their best and yummiest chocolate statues. Dannielle decided to taste it and she took a big bite out of it and then spat it out with disgust. That statue was 20 years old and she had to leave the factory through the mining exit for her punishment. I was the last one and i got asked if I wanted to run the factory and I said yes and his family lived happily ever after.